Tikana - Revision history

Uulmshar at 05:22, 9 January 2018

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-'''Tikana''' is a militaristic country far from the shores of Dargarth. The divine dragon, [[Tika]], is their supreme immortal tyrant. They are the eternal enemy of [[Erzoth]], who worship [[Erz]],
+'''Tikana''' is a militaristic country far from the shores of Dargarth. The divine dragon, [[Tika]], is their supreme immortal leader. They are the eternal enemy of [[Erzoth]], who worship [[Erz]].
-Little as known about this oppressive kingdom, as very few who visit are allowed to leave.
+Little as known about this oppressive kingdom, as very few who visit get to leave.
-Erzothians report that their military is mostly made up of humans, led by a "King Johann," with fel constructs used as siege engines. They are extremely organized, with a strict chain of command.
+Erzothians report that their military is mostly made up of humans and orcs, led by a "King Johann," with fel constructs used as siege engines. They are extremely organized, with a strict chain of command.
-The sellsword, [[Zi]], told a drunken tale once about how ordered and planned everything is, and that it makes the society efficient and fair.
+The bounty-hunter, [[Zi]], once told about the ordered and planned nature of Tikana, and that it makes the society efficient and fair.

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 Little as known about this oppressive kingdom, as very few who visit are allowed to leave.
-Erzothians report that their military is mostly made up of humans, with fel constructs used as siege engines. They are extremely organized, with a strict chain of command.
+Erzothians report that their military is mostly made up of humans, led by a "King Johann," with fel constructs used as siege engines. They are extremely organized, with a strict chain of command.
 The sellsword, [[Zi]], told a drunken tale once about how ordered and planned everything is, and that it makes the society efficient and fair.

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 |SYMBOL=Silver serpentine Dragon
 |COLORS=Light Blue, Black, and Silver
-|STATED ALIGNMENT=Lawful Evil
+|STATED ALIGNMENT=Lawful
 |LEADERS=[[Tika]]
 }}

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	Erzothians report that their military is mostly made up of humans, with fel constructs used as siege engines. They are extremely organized, with a strict chain of command.		Erzothians report that their military is mostly made up of humans, with fel constructs used as siege engines. They are extremely organized, with a strict chain of command.
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		+	The sellsword, [[Zi]], told a drunken tale once about how ordered and planned everything is, and that it makes the society efficient and fair.

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 |MOTTO=
 |FOUNDED=
-|SYMBOL=Silver Dragon
+|SYMBOL=Silver serpentine Dragon
-|COLORS=Light Blue and Silver
+|COLORS=Light Blue, Black, and Silver
 |STATED ALIGNMENT=Lawful Evil
 |LEADERS=[[Tika]]

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 '''Tikana''' is a militaristic country far from the shores of Dargarth. Following the divine dragon, [[Tika]], they are the eternal enemy of [[Erzoth]], who worship [[Erz]],
-Little as known about this oppressive kingdom, as very few who visit are able to leave, again.
+Little as known about this oppressive kingdom, as very few who visit are allowed to leave.
-Erzothians report that their military is mostly made up of humans, with fel constructs used as siege engines.
+Erzothians report that their military is mostly made up of humans, with fel constructs used as siege engines. They are extremely organized, with a strict chain of command.